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Of Frozen Fairytales... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
When April kissed in hues of mist Cinderella dream to linger, wove golden ropes~~Rapunzel's hopes slipped not through princely fingers. In the dream where joy arrives in mystic moonglow's flower, enchantment blooms, pure seed surprise entrances April's bower. Now November draws her tears close within cold tatters of fairytales and dreams to spin till frozen crystal shatters ~ Captive slivers, morning stars to shoot upon the mountain, pour petals, bursting blush again, lovesongs for April's fountain. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Inspired by a poet I know as Kaibab 11/07/2007 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Very beautiful, enjoyed this. Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
K, this enchanting poem is literally "bursting" with mystical imagery!  A veritable feast for the senses and the imagination! Love & Fairytale Dreams, Linda |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
Oh what a very beautiful piece! Even the title was so well constructed, something about it made me want to read it! Truly lovely. Illusive x |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A lovely poem Klassy Lassy, great rhyming much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
This is beautiful. The rhyming is so effortless and unforced in this. A wonderful flow to it. thank you also for your comment on my poem. I would like to her you recite your poem aloud as well. Does klassy lassy have a mic? =) Joe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Joe, No mic...and I'm not at all sure I could pull off a recording of a rhyming poem. Inflection is tricky in avoiding sing-song. Thank you for such a gentle critique. I like doing rhyme. I'd love to be better at free verse, but rhyme is often intrinsic. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
James... Thank you . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Now November draws her tears close within cold tatters of fairytales and dreams to spin till frozen crystal shatters ~" reading your work back to back is a humbling experience KL you are one fine poet |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Your response warms my heart. These two poems were inspired by some fabulous writing that sometimes leaves me speechless. But I've read some of your work, too, and loved it as well. Thank you. Hugs, Karen |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I have never heard of Kaibab, but if this is what happens when you read him, please don't stop! - Owl |
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