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Fairplay
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since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England

0 posted 2007-07-23 04:53 PM


Give up in Afghanistan
Just pray for them instead
Not to beat their women
Not to leave them dead

Give up in Iraq for good
It’s their problem not ours
We have our own families
Houses Gardens cars….

Let Ireland be united
God will sort it out
Close our ears to screaming
Just try to block it out

We don’t need an Army
Life will be so fine…..


Eric Lance Davies

© Copyright 2007 Eric Lance Davies - All Rights Reserved
INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
1 posted 2007-07-23 08:30 PM


Ah, the whit of Sarcasm....

INclan

marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
2 posted 2007-07-25 01:51 PM


Bravo! Creative realistic view.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2007-07-25 02:00 PM


if only we could live without war

*sigh*

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

4 posted 2007-08-21 10:59 AM


WOW, this is very good!!!!!!!!!!!
kasey191
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 33
Australia
5 posted 2007-08-22 08:04 AM


i like it
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