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sorrowfulangel
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0 posted 2007-10-30 02:34 PM



an aching within my soul
never seems to stop it's endless torture
please allow these words their due
and let me justify my enchantment.
a velvety whisper, famailar to your ear
does it hold some captivation?
my secret is not compelling
but is something i have not bestowed to you
please do not interrupt
i have yet to begin...

have i ever shared with you
the experience of having you near
a heat so intense,my very being is seared.
the ebony depth of your eyes craddles me
within a feathery embrace of affection
something i can never bare to depart from.
breathing seems insignifigant
when i feel your caress
my soft skin impacted for enternity.
now do you understand my modest confession?

these tenderly whispered words
are they convicing you of feelings
i long for you to understand.
i must continue with this story
for my bravery did not come easily
as many times as this scene has been reherced.
but my soul will no longer be tormented
for i have found words to express what you invoke..
i love you

sooo...it's been such a long time since i wrote anything,and i'm trying to get back in the game so to speak....tehehehe....

"god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways"

© Copyright 2007 Chelsie - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2007-10-30 03:54 PM


Welcome back, Chelsie...it's good to see your words again!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-11-01 03:08 PM


Enjoyed...James
Margherita
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3 posted 2007-11-01 04:22 PM


but my soul will no longer be tormented
for i have found words to express what you invoke..
i love you


It is a good thing to express one's feelings, a daring soul will be rewarded.

May you continue to be inspired. Welcome back.

Love,
Margherita

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2007-11-01 05:45 PM


I never got to read this the first time.  Thanx for reposting

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2007-11-01 06:12 PM


enjoyed
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