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Open Poetry #41
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Shadow_Singer
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since 2007-10-24
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0 posted 2007-10-28 12:14 PM


I offered a diamond
She offered a heart
I made it two and she jumped to game.

We’ve played before
And I sure we’ll play once more,
But there are times
When the cards lay like life
Or life like cards
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2007-10-28 01:27 PM

Clever metaphor.
Very much enjoyed the tone of this reflective piece.
Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20
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2 posted 2007-10-28 02:21 PM

Love trumps all. Nice read.
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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3 posted 2007-10-28 03:45 PM

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
Shadow_Singer
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 51
4 posted 2007-10-28 10:25 PM

Thanks, I thought this too whimsical, but posted it anyway.  Nice that someone could enjoy.
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