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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2007-10-25 07:13 PM



Splendid Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

~I seek, without speak,
this night of a restless moon
spending her glowing rays of light
in beams softly on my dreams in wait
cloistered in shadows of clustered cumulus
attempting to deny her phasing of her full
knowing that I await to catch small glimpse
she slips past the curtain of clouds in peek
hearing my sighs, she pauses, smiles that
glowing, knowing, that she has phased
across this night in splendid delight
sashaying on the way to others
half a world away, knowing
that they also wait~





~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Betty
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1 posted 2007-10-25 07:24 PM


I just love your moon poems Marge.
Margherita
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2 posted 2007-10-25 07:48 PM


I am happy that I found this splendid moon poem just before going to sleep, dear Marge.

You really have a very special relationship with the moon, a kind of lovers' bond that inspires you always beautifully.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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3 posted 2007-10-25 08:15 PM


I wait too

very much enjoyed this Marge!

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2007-10-25 09:55 PM


Our moon mother, at her fullest.
Birth of the cool Autumn nights.

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5 posted 2007-10-25 11:55 PM


Wow Marge! This is fantastic. It is amazing the way you do this.
Marge Tindal
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Thank you all ... there is Luna Magic in the October sky~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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7 posted 2007-10-27 10:52 PM


Dear Marge:  It really is a splendid moon this month and we have been enjoying it every evening. Lovely poem!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2007-10-28 04:47 PM


You are the Moon Lady of Passions, right??

YEPPER...well done MT...

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9 posted 2007-10-28 05:01 PM


Marge/sis......it's grand isn't it, to understand how big the moon really is?  Love the view you have that includes me.
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10 posted 2007-10-28 08:13 PM


Oh so lovely and quite uplifting! I loved this!!

Illusive x

LindsayP
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11 posted 2007-10-28 08:14 PM



I love your poems Marge and this one is no

exception, well done.

Lindsay

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12 posted 2007-10-29 08:27 AM



Friends~
To share my perceptions of the splendid moon with friends all over the globe is such a delight to me~

Thank you AlL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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13 posted 2007-10-29 05:27 PM


good read
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14 posted 2007-10-29 06:09 PM


Marge...what a splendid write. I saw your big orange friend too.
The Lady
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15 posted 2007-11-01 12:22 PM



I never see a full moon anymore
without thinking of you

I saw this one from the Grand Canyon


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16 posted 2007-11-01 03:44 AM


~Hugging~ you Margie girl This is beautiful.
Hugs
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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17 posted 2007-11-01 10:34 AM


I love your moonglow

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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18 posted 2007-11-01 10:38 AM


my dear lady, always beautiful.
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