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Poohhoney_101
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0 posted 2007-10-23 08:15 PM



ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME
IS WHAT I SAY
WHEN PEOPLE TURN UP THEIR NOSES
AND LOOK MY WAY

ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME
IS WHAT I BELIEVE
BESIDES HES THE ONLY ONE I CAN TRUST AND
HES ALWAYS ON MY TEAM

ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME
IS WHAT IVE BEEN TOLD
BECAUSE GOD IS THE ONE
WHO DECIDES WHERE EVERYONE GOES


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Huan Yi
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1 posted 2007-10-23 08:17 PM


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or maybe not . . .


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ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2007-10-23 09:19 PM


Welcome to Passions
A rather angry tone to your post...poetry is versatile.  It embraces emotions of all kinds.

You did a good job getting the emotion across.
TD

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2007-10-23 09:20 PM


Welcome-

i have just joined myself, well this september, and i know you will fit in very nicely

ARCTIC WIND

Ethan Halo
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4 posted 2007-10-23 09:38 PM


i've learned that anyone can judge you, but god (if you believe in god) probably has the only opinion that matters.

like i said, anyone can judge you, but it's teh opinions you let in that affect you. so kep that filter on and your head held high.

very defiant post. i can dig.
i usually hate all caps, but i think it was a wonderful part of your expression in this piece.

welcome to passions, and i hope you get comfy.

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

illusiveangel
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5 posted 2007-10-23 11:47 PM


I like very much the power behind your words as you write, ( I also happen to 'believe' too ) so I hear very much where you are coming from...Excellent!

Illusive.x

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-10-24 07:01 AM


If you drink and drive and get pulled over by the police a local Judge will be judging you pretty quick...James
SmartChick
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7 posted 2007-10-24 12:00 PM


You wrote the truth, here. Welcome to Pip.
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2007-10-24 12:40 PM


Hi there! Welcome to these blue pages and our circle of friends.

I detect an undercurrent of anger in your powerful words. It appears to me that you have felt unduly judged by others. I do agree that God is our supreme judge ~ and it is what HE thinks that counts the most.

Be true to yourself and walk tall.

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

Margherita
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9 posted 2007-10-24 02:22 PM


Welcome to Pip!

He CAN maybe, but he DOES NOT. That's what I believe, He loves His offspring and taught us not to judge, so that we would not be judged. Jesus said so. We all have our beliefs of course.

But we also have rules to live by ... the best is "Do unto others what you would want them to do unto you".

You have done well to write this from your heart. Answers will be given, no doubt. He always lets us know, but we need to learn to listen.

Love,
Margherita

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10 posted 2007-10-25 10:13 AM


PoohHoney~
A warm welcome to these pages blue~

You are welcomed to share your thoughts and that's what you've done here~

I personally enjoyed the positive tone of your thoughts~

Check out our Spiritual Journeys forum,
I believe you will find much there to enjoy also~

Enjoy your stay with us ....~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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nevermore93
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11 posted 2007-10-25 09:01 PM


great poem.

btw: i was just wondering if you who are here could check out my new poem in the teen poetry section, and tell me what you think.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2007-10-26 06:09 AM


Welcome to our blue pages... a very thought provoking first piece.. I hope to read more of your work...  enjoyed  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

rugged_miss
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13 posted 2007-10-27 03:15 PM


So many of us have found it a duty to judge others according to our standards as we believe we are spotless but we are not, far from that and I hope your poem brings us that awareness


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