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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-10-23 06:32 AM

hemingway would kick his caddy to know
that I chose your over the shoulder glances
over the bolder forbidden fuente

that I left my L word sounds
outside your glass house doorway
just to know the inside of your windows

and read silence between your lines
when you put your fingers over my mouth
and covered your ears with my closed eyes

that I traded my favorite dreamery
the ones with two headed endings
for just a smile from your driver's side

in a love box, double parked at the jail
____________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-24-2007 06:25 AM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-10-23 07:24 AM

oh my Mr Daark... lovely, just lovely! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-10-23 09:15 AM

very nice D

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-10-23 01:32 PM

Impressive ... how do you do it?! To read you is like sharing in an adventure ...

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2007-10-23 04:04 PM

"that I traded my favorite dreamery
the ones with two headed endings
for just a smile from your driver's side

in a love box, double parked at the jail"

it's about those two headed endings
stranger darlin'

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-10-23 05:34 PM

Enjoyed reading this...James

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2007-10-23 05:54 PM

how do you do it?

you just have this way of slipping it in
before i knew it was coming

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2007-10-23 05:59 PM

good read

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2007-10-23 08:43 PM

You have a way of continually teaching
and I continually learn...

you are the mastah mister...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2007-10-24 06:20 AM

Humble thanks pipcrew...I am honored by your eyes.

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