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Teach Me, My Mystic Dancer
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Teach Me, My Mystic Dancer |
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Xillus_Xavier Member
since 2007-10-05
Posts 72Alabama |
[U]Teach Me, My Mystic Dancer[/U] Candle dancer burning bright Entertains my eyes tonight Wick and wax provides a song Flicking flame - it sways along Mystic beats within the flow Rythmic moves - I do not know Teach me flame, this prance you do For I would love to dance with you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
X_X, mesmerizing! Your words glow!  Love & Candle Light, EA |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
X~ How many times I have watched the flame flicker in dance ... you brought it delicately to life~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
xx- nicely done ARCTIC WIND |
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Kalle Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 89Finland |
Is the rythmic dispelled intentionally? Otherwise this really is kind of mesmerizing the idea of Dance in looking at a flame, why not? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
nice |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Different and interesting.Looking into a fire place would do it too I guess. "late" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Awesome write! Creative, clever, and beautiful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very very lovely. I never tire to watch the flame's dance, it's really inspiring. Love, Margherita |
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