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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-10-19 06:54 PM

       October Dreams

Through these tangled hills
on this grand October night,
clear-crystal echoes of
  distant bells
ripple the sky in song,
and cleanse the soul
in formless joy
that tickles the mind
to contemplate
the fine pale geometry
of an Autumn moon…
and to dance through clouds
of timeless, fleeting dreams
in self-enlightened recognition,
(with sight beyond all defenses)
like reflection and form
truly meeting in a mirror
for the very first time…
to be lost in permanent
  wonder!
                 ~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-10-19 06:57 PM

oh my Bruce... simply stunning! such beautiful imagery you have created.. thank you RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2007-10-20 01:50 PM

"distant bells
ripple the sky in song"
I love the sound of bells...
and with your words, I can SEE these sound ripples

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-10-20 02:51 PM

Bruce~

October's dreams have birthed me
many a long year ago
Set my feet upon the poetic path
that I have come to know~

Contemplation of elation
falls across the shadow-of-my-knowing
Through October's dreams
I shall always be going~

AGAIN, my friend ... you splash me with inspirational ink~
Thank you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-10-20 04:13 PM

lovely

i really really really enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2007-10-21 03:47 PM

Beautiful imagery.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2007-10-21 08:25 PM

Exquisite!

Love,
Margherita

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2007-10-23 06:03 PM

liked it

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

8 posted 2007-10-23 08:52 PM

How did I miss this one? Greatly enjoyed, especially -

"the fine pale geometry
of an Autumn moon…
and to dance through clouds
of timeless, fleeting dreams
in self-enlightened recognition,
(with sight beyond all defenses)"

and

"like reflection and form
truly meeting in a mirror
for the very first time…
to be lost in permanent
wonder!"

Beautifully written with an eternal message!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2007-10-24 10:45 AM

The vapors clear, to expose the geometry of a perfect October moon.
Signal to the sea, to blow wet upon the land, and fill the voids between night and morning.

Great imagery!
Inspiring choice of words Bruce.
TD

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2007-10-24 04:35 PM

Nice...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2007-10-25 01:15 AM

"distant bells
ripple the sky in song"

how beautiful this work and this turn of phrase poet

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

12 posted 2007-10-25 01:59 AM

Enjoyed your thoughts. "Late"

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