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vandana
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0 posted 2007-10-19 11:58 AM



Days of love,
Ways of caring,
Day's light,
Night's coming

Stars are so bright,
Days of loving you,
Loving me

Days of love
You wander away
through this stages,

Days of love,
Days of light,
Let the bright coming
Through days

Days of love,
days of hope
days of light,

Days of love,
Days of hope,
Giving its way,
own time

Days of love,
light and blessing,
Ways of tomorrow,
Days of love


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-10-19 03:47 PM


Nice...James
LindsayP
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2 posted 2007-10-19 10:52 PM



Nice write Vandana, much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Sunshine
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3 posted 2007-10-19 10:54 PM


Vandana, I have watched you grow
for a few years now...

and it amazes me with every write
how far your roots travel!

Write on!



" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Tim
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4 posted 2007-10-19 10:54 PM


very nice, I enjoyed your poem.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-10-20 06:18 AM


I like this!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

SEA
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6 posted 2007-10-20 11:37 AM


this is beautiful
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-10-20 11:43 AM


vandana, may all your days be

"Days of love,
days of hope
days of light,"

Lovely poem!


EA

ethome
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8 posted 2007-10-20 03:02 PM


Very very nice and simply put with such grace.

Eric

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