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A Sonnet
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A Sonnet |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
A Sonnet What light doth bring such love with morning sun and kiss away the freshness of the dew a lovely special glow second to none and cherished with the birth each day anew How in Thy light the radiant caress intoxicates and captivates complete yet holds enamored soul with tenderness fulfills its e'er yearning heart so sweet Where in the universe is one so rare that blends with day and night so perfectly with flashing eyes and shining starlit hair that glowing smile is such a joy to see There in a dream a wonderland delight Here in my heart and thoughts both day and night MoonShadow . |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 this is WONDERFUL!!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and a mighty fine sonnet, it be! Is there a name for a 10 syllables per line sonnet? I enjoy reading your vast variety of poetic forms. I am so pleased to have caught this one today.  EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooops-a-daisy! I meant to save it to my MoonShadow folder of poetic treasures! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The title didn't do much for me, but the poem was a joy to read...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I must agree...a most fine 'write' possibly singing out for a better title?! much applause for the poem! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Moon Shadow, you have certainly excelled your self with this poem. one of the best that I have read of yours, Keep up the good work. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
There in a dream a wonderland delight Here in my heart and thoughts both day and night wonderfully expressed words here Ken... beautiful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"What light doth bring such love with morning sun" oh the love that you express gentle Kenneth your words delight the heart |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
SEA - Thank you for your response. Linda - Yes there is (Iambic Pentameter). I am glad you enjoy my fondness for classic form. James - Thank you for your thoughts. Secondhandpoet - Thank you for the read and response. RDB - A couplet that completes... thank you. Kate - Milady, love flows easily when heart to heart. Thank you for a deligtful response. |
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