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Open Poetry #41

Still Holds The Pen

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-10-16 02:13 AM

Still Holds The Pen

Chapters were written
Parts penned equally
Two hearts combined
With loving clarity

To be continued later
They had said to me
So here I am waiting
Ever so patiently

I heard nothing since
How long would it be
Why did he say soon
I wonder obviously

While biding my time
Would silence abate
Soon perhaps meant
At some later date

Awaiting continuation
Its not knowing when
Heart without closure
Still holds the pen

Hope 2007
The poem with music and graphic here below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91007551.html

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-10-16 04:40 PM

"Awaiting continuation
Its not knowing when
Heart without closure
Still holds the pen"

always feel your words...

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-10-16 09:57 PM

always enjoy your poetry hope!

ARCTIC WIND

bnabors
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since 2007-10-08

Posts 20

3 posted 2007-10-17 08:21 AM

Hope, Nice work nice pic.too
your friend

Bob Nabors
10-17-07

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2007-10-18 12:45 PM

Another great write Hope, much enjoyed.

Lindsay

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-10-18 03:40 AM

I agree with SEA:
That last verse does it for me.
Very nice write Hope!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.

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