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BobbyBoy
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since 2007-08-22
Posts 21
West Yorkshire

0 posted 2007-10-11 05:32 PM




Street lights like Spotlights as Night falls
The unspoken dream of England
Long, dead and buried
Its children rule the streets
The old have lost their merit
The immigrants rape the benefits
Its the beginning of the end
Just a point of opinion
Or just the way it is

Times where the Good old days rest behind us
Political indecision, Family breakdown
Lack of supervision in the playground

Tyranny, conspiracy the revelation of the day
Tough law gone soft, unemployment blots
Just a point of opinion
Or just the way it is

Street Crime like sports or rock star
The unspoken benefit cheats side-robbery
Old ways of thuggery
Have become honoured traditions,
naturally

The gangs have gained their merit
The politicians rape the benefits
Its the beginning of the end
Just a point of opinion
Or just the way it is

Times where the Good old days rest behind us
Hoodies cuddled in bus stops,
Needles adjourn in gutters
Lack of supervision in the Home world
Bad parents the revelation of the day
Tough law gone soft, political correctness blots
Just a point of opinion
Or just the way it is

Times when the Good old days rest behind us
No more opinion, It’s just the way it is
Welcome to England
At Customs declare immorality



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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-10-11 05:51 PM


I do declare! I do miss the Merry Olde England of yore!

"Times when the Good old days rest behind us
No more opinion, It’s just the way it is
Welcome to England
At Customs declare immorality"

~ Terrific closing!


EA

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-10-11 07:21 PM


I enjoyed reading this...now tell me its not true...otherwise the "Rise and Fall of The British Empire" would seem appropriate...James
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