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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-10-11 05:41 AM


Remembering Moments

We do not remember days..
we remember moments.
~Cesare Pavese~

I remember moments
when you were
close to me.
I remember moments
when you were
the only woman
my eyes could see.
I remember moments
when my heart
I gave to thee.
I remember every
precious moment
you spent with me,
when each one
seemed to be
an eternity.

JamesLee
11October
2007





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taramw
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1 posted 2007-10-11 09:57 AM


Hmm..... i liked this

It's better to be a lion for a day than a sheep all your life.
-- Sister Elizabeth Kenny

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-10-11 10:14 AM


Dear James, this is beautiful and I love you quoting Cesare Pavese!

Love
Margherita

vandana
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3 posted 2007-10-12 12:32 PM


enjoyed
quatro
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4 posted 2007-10-12 02:03 PM


James,

Beautiful sentiments and wonderful moments indeed...she is special.

quatro

alex09
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5 posted 2007-10-12 03:21 PM


i like it!!!!!!it's cool.
LindsayP
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6 posted 2007-10-12 11:36 PM



James aren't memories a wonderful thing, especcially memories like you have told us about here, great write.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-10-13 06:31 AM


yes, James... moments are precious... enjoyed . RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-10-17 04:04 PM


Thank you taramw, Margherita, vandana, quatro, Alex, Lindsey and Roniece for the lovely responses...James
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