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Warrior Bristo
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0 posted 2007-10-10 09:56 PM



Tranquil, silent, and serene
Deep and weightless
In a dream
Relaxed and calm
No sense of time
Carelessness and
Peace of mind

warrior undefeated
  

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2007-10-10 09:59 PM


I REALLY like this 'write'!

a sanctuary of most fine and placid minimalism!

serious applause!!

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2 posted 2007-10-10 09:59 PM


This is quite soothing, especially when 'softly' whispered.
Warrior Bristo
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3 posted 2007-10-10 10:00 PM


thank you, both of you, very much.

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Artic Wind
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4 posted 2007-10-10 10:24 PM


Enjoyed very much

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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5 posted 2007-10-10 11:18 PM



Warrior,
peace of mind is something we all strive for, I'm glad that you have found it.

Lindsay

Warrior Bristo
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6 posted 2007-10-11 12:13 PM


indeed, I have found it... in my element. I love that you call me Warrior

warrior undefeated
  

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2007-10-13 11:01 PM


Very sooooothing ,Warrior.
                        Ida

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8 posted 2007-10-14 05:08 AM


Just what I needed!  Thank you.

- Owl

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-10-14 08:22 AM


absolutely beautiful!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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10 posted 2007-10-14 09:34 AM


sounds like just what I need right now Thanks for The thoughts
adagio

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11 posted 2007-10-14 12:36 PM


love this...

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2007-10-14 03:44 PM


"Tranquil, silent, and serene
Deep and weightless
In a dream
Relaxed and calm
No sense of time
Carelessness and
Peace of mind"

~ Your soothing "Water Chant" brings with it, calming, healing waters.



EA

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