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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2007-10-10 05:56 PM




Detail of Gustav Klimt's "The Kiss"
* * *

Press your smile on mine
… then slowly let it die
passion wears a different face
close your eyes and glide
along the quicksilver pace
of your heart and your mind.

Breathe and let your blood race
feel it gush through your veins
lose track of your thoughts
untie yourself from restraint
slip into freedom’s domain
I am ready for the journey, see
together we are taking flight.

Up to the moon and beyond
at ultrasound speed we move
Universe watches our dance
with its many discreet eyes.
We drift within spirals of light
entwined in a divine embrace.

The sound of our joint voices,
in our very own song of songs,
reaches far into the cosmic depth
and echoes without end
making all the souls long
to sing and dance along.

And now my sweet Angel
recover your charming smile
for it nurtures and calms me
in the time of in between.
And soon enough I’ll ask you again
… to press your smile on mine

* * *


© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-10-10 06:29 PM


"Press your smile on mine"

Margherita, I shall never forget that line! ~ and may use it myself, if you don't mind, the next time I am wanting a kiss!

Loves 'n smiles!

Linda

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-10-10 07:07 PM


A wonderful flow of romantic words...James
Xillus_Xavier
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3 posted 2007-10-10 07:37 PM


This was a good poem.
I like the opening line as well

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2007-10-10 09:16 PM


An eternal cosmic kiss!

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-10-10 10:23 PM


very poetic poem OF COURSE LOL

ENJOYED

ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
6 posted 2007-10-11 06:46 AM


ms mar, this is such a lovely slice of tender..well done
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2007-10-11 07:05 AM


I would love to hear this in voice~~

lovely

M

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
8 posted 2007-10-13 03:39 PM




"Press your smile on mine
… then slowly let it die
passion wears a different face"

powerful beginning to an amazing poem
beautiful Margherita


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