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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-10-09 05:41 AM


Oh Pretty Baby

Oh pretty baby
you drive me crazy
with that big black
jaguar on your back.
I'm sneakin' in
to share your sin
partaking of a
full frontal attack.
I brought my treasure
to share some pleasure,
within soft caress
of silky skin,
once I attack
no turning back
just one kiss
placed upon
her sultry lips,
and thats where  
we will share
the sweetest nights
in paradise.

JamesLee
09October
2007







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Abena Williams
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1 posted 2007-10-09 08:28 AM


Wow James,

I like the place where you are at!

Abena x


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-10-09 09:04 AM


Ain't love grand?!?

You wear it well!

Hugs to you, Hawaii Man!

Linda

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-10-09 04:40 PM


Thank you Abena and Earth Angel for the lovely responses...James
garysgirl
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4 posted 2007-10-09 11:56 PM


James, this is so romantic!
Good to see you are still in love. So am I!
Hugs,
Ethel

Honeybunch
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5 posted 2007-10-10 02:23 AM


James - May you always be in love!
Margherita
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6 posted 2007-10-10 01:35 PM


More than romantic, this is downright passionate I would say, dear James!

Aloha!

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
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7 posted 2007-10-10 11:30 PM



James I wish I could come to paradise with

you. nice write, take care.

Lindsay.

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-10-14 06:58 AM


Thank you garysgirl, Honeybunch, Margherita and Lindsay for the wonderful responses...James
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