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cokeiq
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since 2007-08-24
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0 posted 2007-10-04 12:31 PM



You walked by me, strolled right on
Beseeching help – there is none
No Jesus, Buddha or Allah
Just me in the cold winter, waiting to die

Considering alternatives, yet one by one
Hopes flickered and died
My early youth, folly kills
Still I’m young, very young to die in this cold

I ran, and kept on running
Please someone, but there is none
I knocked, screamed and was nice
But it’s no good

I lowered my head, stripped away all I believed in
Neon lights intoxicating music
Surviving, still alive
The crowds cheer, while I danced on the poles

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