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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-10-03 06:50 AM



overture
like a stairway
in spiral stepping down

wondering
the depths
wandering blind

recognition
the scent of woman
like the smell of dreams

re-dreamed
and worn as water
on the restless edge of skin

and at the bottom there dwells a sky


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daark

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-10-03 07:03 AM


Ohhhh!!

Wonderful ouverture!

Love,
Margherita

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-10-03 07:26 AM


you make such beautiful music D.  
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2007-10-03 05:26 PM


ms mar, thank you musical friend

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ms gs, thank you for playing this on your mind

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2007-10-05 01:21 PM


I agree
the orchestra is playing your composition
beautifully this morning.

A

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2007-10-05 01:23 PM


:: Laughs ::

Do you get every reply - even those edited.  I could not remember how to spell "symphony" -- it all looks funny to me.

Hope I made you laugh if you got all three replies.

A

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-10-06 06:05 PM


Enjoyed...James
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
7 posted 2007-10-06 10:24 PM


very interesting 'write'!

serious applause!!

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2007-10-07 07:29 AM


ms az, I read your mind, not the words..3 more please, always more..thanks hon

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james, thank you


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seconds, thank you for the minutes here


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