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Open Poetry #41

bow of odin

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-10-02 06:26 AM

from the valley of dark wood
it will be my soul that beckons
it will be my voice that whispers

I will watch your eyes as mornings
as you drift your bow from sea
and jut into my willing shore

marking me with your blade edge
abrading into my bosom deep
with the splintering of your tattoos

I will know the scent of you, dragon
as you devour into my offerings
and glut your timbers with my grains

discover me now for I was never lost

____________

daark

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2007-10-02 06:52 AM

a ~~smiling~~ morning

M

SEA

Moderator

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-10-02 10:10 AM

*SIGHS*

oh I do love this....lots and lots

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-10-02 10:15 AM

oden, keeps one warm
delightful confident poem...

enjoyed....

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2007-10-02 12:28 PM

This is such a virile write, powerful, almost intimidating... thinking of ten targets at once ... I run.

A bow for your mastery!

Love,
Margherita

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2007-10-02 06:44 PM

m'friend...you are a god of poetry.....

Love the flavor of you here..

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2007-10-03 06:40 AM

ladies, thank you for viewing this piece..am sure odin would be pleased to wear your eyes here too

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