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Open Poetry #41

Keep Thrilling Me

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-09-27 03:50 PM

Keep Thrilling Me

I don't want to be
only your man
of yesterday.
I want to be
your man of today
and of your tomorrows.
Fall into my arms,
woman of many charms,
melt into my arms,
keep thrilling me,
keep thrilling me,
thrill me with
your many charms,
keep thrilling me,
keep thrilling me,
keep thrilling me.

JamesLee
27Septembre
2007

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2007-09-27 06:05 PM

Nice writing James.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-09-28 05:13 AM

Thank you JL...I appreciate it...James

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2007-10-03 07:19 PM

I really like this one!!!!!!!!!!

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

4 posted 2007-10-03 07:46 PM

Awesome write

I love the title.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2007-10-03 11:58 PM

I can see you have the right idea James, keep working at it, and I wish you luck.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-10-04 05:34 AM

Thank you WindWalker, Saunni and Lindsay for the nice responses...James

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