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gwaihir
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0 posted 2007-07-21 12:27 PM

Saffron chases midnight blue
out of the sky.
Sliver of moon dangles
from the solitary star brave enough
to face the day.
Coolness of the night sky
slowly lost in the warmth
as daylight spreads.
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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2007-07-21 01:36 AM

beautiful! Welcome to Pip
aziza
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2 posted 2007-07-21 01:53 AM

Very lovely.

Welcome and thank you for the gift
of your poetry.

Alison
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3 posted 2007-07-21 02:24 AM

Excellent piece. Beautiful imagery.
Jess
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4 posted 2007-07-21 02:29 AM

I love the colors. You describe them so wonderfully
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2007-07-21 09:20 AM

Lovely writing with beautiful imagery.  Very much enjoyed your words here.  Welcome to Pip and I will be looking forward to reading more from you.
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
6 posted 2007-07-21 09:22 AM

beautiful
welcome to the passion
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-07-21 09:46 AM

Hi, there! I'm giving you a warm, welcoming hug for this gorgeous break of day poem.

"Saffron chases midnight blue
out of the sky."

~ I especially appreciated the above lines. Actually, the entire poem was a poetic gem!

May you love these seas of blue as much as I do! Welcome aboard the pip ship!

Love & Light,

Earth Angel
gwaihir
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8 posted 2007-07-21 10:11 AM

Thanks for the comments everybody.  I appreciate the warm welcome.  
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9 posted 2007-07-21 06:58 PM

I enjoyed your visual imagery, especially:
"Saffron chases midnight blue"
passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2007-07-21 09:16 PM

I work nights, so I see this every day

well written!

welcome to passions!
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11 posted 2007-07-21 09:20 PM

welcome to passions nice read
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12 posted 2007-07-21 10:18 PM

Hey, KOOL write,  my friend...ENjoyed.

jwesley
gwaihir
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13 posted 2007-07-22 12:06 PM

Midnitesun, passing shadows, vandana and jw:  
Thanks for commenting.  I have to be at work pretty early and I saw this star and the thinnest crescent moon two mornings in a row about two years ago. I haven't seen the exact same configuration of moon and star and sun since then.  I keep looking.        
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14 posted 2007-07-22 06:56 PM

The happenchance of seeing such
always leaves us a good memory, Poet.
I remember that very moon....it was a
time in our lives...

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!
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15 posted 2007-07-22 08:57 PM

cool first post gw ! seems like i was there lol
~J

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv
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16 posted 2007-07-23 09:12 AM

What a beautiful dawn... and what a lovely entrance you've made... welcome to Passions!!!
BBGrrl
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17 posted 2007-07-23 12:52 PM

I have a way with colour? *bows*

This is lovely.  Thank you for sharing your eyes.
gwaihir
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18 posted 2007-07-24 10:43 PM

Sunshine,
Thanks for the greeting card.  

aj wolf, suthern and BBG

Thanks for commenting.  
JamesMichael
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19 posted 2007-08-02 04:59 PM

A fine piece of writing...James
gwaihir
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20 posted 2007-08-08 08:27 PM

Thanks, Janmes.  I appreciate you stopping by.  
CocoBaci
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21 posted 2007-08-28 01:47 PM

Eloquent... enjoyed the read!

*~coco~*
MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
22 posted 2007-08-28 04:52 PM

Lovely Imagery. Welcome to the blue pages.

         MoonShadow
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gwaihir
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23 posted 2007-08-28 08:23 PM

CocoBaci and MoonShadow:  Thanks for stopping by and letting me know you did.  
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