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Whispering Sensations
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Whispering Sensations |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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It is there in the early morning hours when steam still rolls off a cup a' joe that I hear your hello lightly brush against the curve of my throat as the sunrise watches the dark slowly slip away smoothly in whispering sensations. your so smooth |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful warm , sensual feelings expressed Hope |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I totally sense the deliciously indescribable effect of the mix of memories, morning sunlight, and the first scent of coffee in this wonderful 'write'! serious, sustained applause!! |
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ameteurpoet101 Junior Member
since 2007-09-24
Posts 18The island of sunshine, Jamaica |
this reminds me so much of my own "whispering sensations" you didnt need another letter, word or line to deliver.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Dull Glitter Junior Member
since 2007-09-25
Posts 11Iowa, USA |
Beautiful! I liked the poem's voice. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
So aptly titled... so sweetly said leaves a lasting impression. MoonShadow . |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
oh my... this is quite good. and now that you mention it, i better start a fresh pot! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"that I hear your hello lightly brush against the curve of my throat" ouch it hurts so good gentle Donna |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This sadly beautiful poem slithers delicously over the senses and emotions. Thank you, Donna. - Owl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each for the kindness of your words. Kate, yes it does hurt so good.....yes?? Owl...dear friend it is SO very good to see you here again. I have missed your shine on these blue pages!! |
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