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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-09-25 05:07 AM


This Marvelous Opportunity

As I look into her eyes
its like turning on a light
in the middle of the night
then the reasons become clear
why I want her to be so near
she's simply a sweet delight
thats why I hold her tight
she's so special and sincere
and so I call her dear
she's got to be the best thing
that ever happened to me
and I thank God for this
marvelous opportunity.

JamesLee
25September
2007





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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2007-09-25 07:36 AM


And this, my friend, is a “Marvelous Opportunity” to read what I think is one of your very best poems.  Marvelous job James.


JL


Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-09-25 05:47 PM


thank you JL...much appreciated...James
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