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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-09-24 08:04 PM

Pleasured

Coral light interprets
The heat signature
Between two harmonious forms

Such that intrinsic curls define discovery
As explore

Paused mid kiss, adherence as prophecy-
Deep drums more the breath of spaces between

Linger and mime, the heartbeat of time
Wave upon wave

In final wretch, inhibitions quenched
Fall the veils of the soul
In glee follows
The surf to twilight shore

Copyright Kkh 9/24/07

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-09-24 08:22 PM

Wow!: ‘coral light’…’harmonious forms’…
          ‘the heartbeat of time’…
          ‘fall(ing) veils of the soul(!)’…
          ‘glee follow(ing)…surf
           to twilight shore’

This is masterful imaging!

Applause!!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2007-09-24 08:23 PM

intriguing, interesting...soothing yet
sensual...a beautiful write K..

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2007-09-24 08:30 PM

Wow! Absolutely beautiful!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-09-24 10:01 PM

BEYOND BEAUTIFUL

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2007-09-24 11:15 PM

Hi, TD! Another fine example of your talent for writing poetry!

~ I especially appreciated the following:

"Linger and mime, the heartbeat of time
Wave upon wave" ~ Awwwww, yessss.

Warm hug,

EA

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2007-09-25 07:40 AM

Amazed. I am just amazed at your intrinsic thoughts.
A beauty.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2007-09-25 10:51 AM

Stunningly beautiful write!

Love,
Margherita

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2007-09-25 11:03 AM

nice read

PoppaLoco
Member

since 2007-09-23

Posts 83
EU, NL, Limburg

9 posted 2007-09-25 12:57 PM

Buildup, climax, ending.. Triggered everything there was to trigger, in the conventional order, in such an unconventional way! Loved it.

Pops

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