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Open Poetry #41

Consuming

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

0 posted 2007-09-24 09:34 AM

Time always makes me long for you
Sweat dripping onto anxious skin
Our pulses merge into a melody
Love consumes me

To lie in your arms once more
Your fingertip painting my cheek
Breaths fall in unison
Love consumes you

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-09-24 10:39 AM

hmmmmmmmmm

this is indeed consuming.

Very intense!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-09-24 10:53 AM

Tina, very romantic, loved ARCTIC WIND

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-09-24 02:52 PM

this...

"Your fingertip painting my cheek"

I know this so well
perfect

good to see you Tina

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

4 posted 2007-09-24 03:38 PM

Thanks for all of the kind words..

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2007-09-24 04:35 PM

'real', powerful 'write'!

applause!!

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

6 posted 2007-09-25 04:50 PM

Thanks secondhand.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-09-26 03:53 PM

Nice...James

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2007-09-26 04:01 PM

Sweet like a Georgia peach.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

9 posted 2007-09-28 11:31 AM

Thanks James & JL

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