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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2007-09-23 09:50 PM




I wished I hadn't kissed regrets' hand:
Because it Rattled the poltergeists
Playing poker all around my head

I hated facing all the demons
Woven deep within my tangled hair

But in the end I was still alive
because I learned to cut loose ends
That had taken control of my life

And I kind of like my new hair cut...

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

© Copyright 2007 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-09-23 09:55 PM


Juju

nice poem, i really enjoyed reading this poem, i have just started so, i am so excited. i have posted my first two poems!

YAH!

good job


ARCTIC WIND

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2007-09-23 09:56 PM


Where are your poems?

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-09-23 09:58 PM


juju,      


Beautiful poem, and I love how you wrote it with your beautiful energy.It's a

With warming hugs

EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-23-2007 10:52 PM).]

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
4 posted 2007-09-23 10:01 PM


Why not? I enjoy reading poetry.(:

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-09-23 10:06 PM


Well, thank you


i am flattered

i love your poetry, it is very well written

ARCTIC WIND

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