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Leaving Your Memories
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Leaving Your Memories |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Leaving your heart, Leaving your love behind, Behind it all, leaving your words Leaving your memories, All the heartache, Leaving your memories with me, Your memories with me Leaving your memories behind, behind your love, Leaving our home, Walking through the open road, Carrying your memories with me, Smiling back through all the years, Leaving your memories All your love, All your heart, This heart of mine, Will find a way To our path, Leaving your memories |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This aches, dear vandana, but as you say your heart will find a way, I am sure! Enjoyed your words! Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...some memories can be bittersweet...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Enjoyed the read. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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noobster Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 10 |
Nice read |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I enjoyed your poem. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Van darling one, as always your writing is both deeply moving and truly beautiful. The ache within throbs, exquisite As always Mushy X x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Sekishu Junior Member
since 2007-09-17
Posts 36 |
Arnt these two lines contridictory? "Leaving your memories behind" "Carrying your memories with me" Or am I misinterpreting it? |
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