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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-07-20 06:52 AM

like a meandering yawn
is dawn pushing apart the morning
of her gator back sky shirt

she bends down over black trees
pretending to be people
with their wind whispery

and waters their mouths
with the dew wet jewelry
that has known her scent

since dragons were butterflys
and night diamonds on her bosom
were still sand sighs with edges

that wrote poetry in saliva oceans
__________

logograph by daark

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-07-20 08:56 AM

I love how you see things

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2007-07-20 09:44 AM

I can just see it...
You possess a tasty mind, sir.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2007-07-20 02:50 PM

ms suesea, thanks babe!!

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ms kahlil, bless you for the blessing, thanks

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2007-07-20 03:08 PM

You have such a gift of vision....and oh, I so do enjoy your visions. Never, ever quit sharing them with us pleeeeeeeasseee..

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

5 posted 2007-07-20 03:54 PM

Once again man, this is amazing, really. That second stanza blew me away. You've got it bro, keep it up. Cheerios - Ed

“Well all the apostles, they’re sittin’ on the swings, sayin’ I’d sell off my savior for a set of new rings.”

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2007-07-20 05:34 PM

ms GS, thanks babe!!

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ed, thank you sir for the read

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

7 posted 2007-07-22 12:39 PM

Dark One .. reading you always
reminds me of e.e. cummings *smiles*
the words just weave and twist in dance
and always leave me smiling

~Sheli

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2007-07-22 04:36 AM

Mesmerizing Mr Daark! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2007-07-22 08:47 AM

DC...am sure cummings would flip you off for that,,,but I appreciate your comments..

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R & B, thanks lady friend

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2007-07-22 10:28 AM

Dark~
I just ADORE this one ... liking the very all of it~

I'm so glad you share~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2007-07-23 12:08 PM

"like a meandering yawn
is dawn pushing apart the morning
of her gator back sky shirt"

stranger darlin'
morning, afternoon, evening
you put your finger stamp on all of them
and you do it so well

so well...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2007-07-23 06:23 AM

ms marge, thanks lady!!

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ladyone, thank you babe for the eyes and smiles

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