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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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I want the silence of together to treat me like a lady and when apart I want to be the monarch of your heart. I want eyes to see the real me, hands to touch my soul, and fingertips to gently trace the lines of my desire. I want the silence of your choice to stay beside the river that flows inside for you and the silence of your heat that speaks of love to be. I want to breathe your ecstasy mingled with my own and I want the blend of passion to still my restlessness. I want the silence of your smile, your memories, dreams and needs and the silence of your mind that never says goodbye. I want the silence of your presence in the silence of my love! Helen / 18 September 2007 |
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Sexy_Tator_Tot Junior Member
since 2007-08-31
Posts 42Arkansas |
Very nice. I liked it a lot. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is more than nice, it's fantastic, dear Helen! I want ... it's important to express our wants and you do it in such a captivating way! Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks sexy TT - glad you liked it. Margherita - Thank you so much for your lovely comment. It can sometimes take a long time to know what we want but when we do know and if there's "poetry" in the soul, expression naturally follows. Something like that.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks for the read, James. Much appreciated. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Loved your poem Helen, I hope you write alot more of that calibre, much enjoyed. LindsayP |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks LindsayP - Much appreciate your comment. Maybe that's enough to want and not get but I'm sure I can be pushed to think of more. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Helen, "I want"... to SAVE this!!! I adore this penning from your poetic heart!!!  ...There, I saved it! "I want eyes to see the real me, hands to touch my soul, and fingertips to gently trace the lines of my desire." ~ Exactomondo!  Lovely poem! Lovely you! Loving hug, Linda |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Honeybunch, I want you to know that your writing has expressed the deep, silent want within me, and I'm sure so many other readers whose hearts beat in agreement as they read. Very creative... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks lovely Linda!  Kahlil - Thank you! I'm glad my words were meaningful for you. I'm not sure if those wants expressed are actually attainable in the world of today or if they ever were. However, there is a another place and if we plan and design it here, it surely will be found. Helen |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
honeybunch i enjoy reading your poems |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you Artic Wind! It's so nice to know that someone finds some measure of enjoyment from my rambles. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I want the silence of your choice to stay beside the river that flows inside for you and the silence of your heat that speaks of love to be. ~*~ IWIHWT...oh, indeed I do....  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi Sunshine! Thanks Sunshine! |
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