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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2007-09-16 02:40 PM

Filigreed frost
etched on glass pane,
Snow birds are singing
in wint'ry refrain,
Brisk is the color
of fresh-fallen snow,
Acorns are hidden
entombed just below.
Shadow's are icy
in dawn's first appear,
Proud oaks once regal,
now shiver austere,
In the garden no taste
of melon or grape,
The tongue it knows only
of land's frozen scape,
Out in the meadow,
lies burrow dug deep
In wait for spring's wakening
curls vixen asleep,
While back on the window,
iced drawings embossed,
Cede to the warming,
of morning's accost.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-09-16 02:49 PM

Wonderful write, dear Tim! Nothing like such white scenery bringing peace!

Love,
margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-09-16 03:03 PM

Enjoyed your snow-filled write although I can't even imagine living with such weather.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-09-16 04:33 PM

Nice flow of words...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2007-09-16 09:27 PM

love the way you took us away from the window into the world
and then brought us back Tim

lovely work...

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2007-09-16 09:38 PM

Lovely poem Tim

much enjoyed LindsayP

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2007-09-17 02:29 AM

Loved Your winter morning!

~Warm Hugs

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2007-09-17 09:29 AM

Tim~

'Filigreed frost
etched on glass pane'

Lovely lovely thoughts here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 2007-09-19 06:21 PM

I believe your poem just made me long a bit for winter...just a bit though. Lovely verse

Ruth

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2007-09-19 10:11 PM

Winter always makes me think of my childhoodand you write about it so well.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2007-09-20 06:38 AM

I love winter and the "Filigreed frost"...

M

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