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Tim
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0 posted 2007-09-16 01:45 PM



I am always fickle
When it comes to my dill pickle,
I like 'em crisp and tart,
Right from the very start,
Up until the final bite,
A crunchy dill delight.
If I get a soggy cuke,
It wants to make me puke,
So let's make each pickle stout,
For that is what a dill's about,
A kosher with pucker,
Now that's a tasty sucker,
If I only got a nickle,
For each time I ate a pickle,
But I didn't so I am poor,
Yet I 'll still eat me some more,
'Cause I got to have my pickle,
To feel its tingly tickle,
In my mouth, as pickle crunches,
Gosh, I love my pickle bunches.

© Copyright 2007 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
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South Africa
1 posted 2007-09-16 03:01 PM


  Thanks for the smile!
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2007-09-16 04:03 PM


Enjoyed.

(Karen is showing incredible restraint)

*laughing*

Much fun, you!

moondogz
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Great White North
3 posted 2007-09-16 04:35 PM


Tim, that is D~LIGHT~FULL.
I could...see it, smell it,
hear it and taste it.
        moon.

The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2007-09-16 09:38 PM



delightful!

and I feel Karen's restraint!  


divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
5 posted 2007-09-16 09:40 PM


cute

or should i say .. dill-light-ful

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2007-09-17 02:11 AM


Gosh! I wanna gnosh! ~ on a pickle! But that is not bedtime fare! Oh, well, what the h...l, one tiny, eensy, teensy, pickle shouldn't disturb my slumber that much!

A delectable write!

From one pickle puss to another, I bid you good night!

EA exits and opens up the fridge...

Munch a bunch,


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