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Chosen one
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since 2007-09-13
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0 posted 2007-09-14 05:31 PM


  

                The Daughter of Poseidon
                      



                  The king of the sea
                   Bring forth thee
                Beyond all compassion
                  Sweet satisfaction
                  Long hair as silk
                 Skin as fair as milk
                   Daughters of sea
                Come forth ... to thee

                  
               oh how beautiful you are
            living in a magical land so far
                    lips as ruby red
             laying on a shell, as a bed
                 Daughter of the sea
                come forth.... to thee

         singing your song for your romantic need
              punishing those who have greed
              blessed with a soul of beauty
        your smell as flower with a hint of fruity
                    Daughter of sea
                  Come forth... to thee

                the king of the sea
                  bring forth thee
                beyond all compassion
                 sweet satisfaction
                  long hair as silk
                 skin as fair as milk
                  Daughters of the sea
                 come forth...to thee
                  
                        



[This message has been edited by Chosen one (09-14-2007 06:49 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-09-14 09:31 PM


Aha! It's so nice to read a poem by you ~ and a delightful one at that! I too, love to write about the sea, and sirens, Poseidon and mystical places! I enjoyed your debuting post, very much!

Congratulatory hug!

EA

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2007-09-14 09:53 PM


Hello, and Welcome, Chosen One.  

My sense is that you have chosen your name
for a very special reason, and I smile at all
of the images it brings forth in my own mind.

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2007-09-14 10:49 PM


Ah..so sweet...yes I am the daughter of the sea...a mermaid, little fishy...

     

I swim with delight, heart aglow,
inside your fish bowl...

The chosen One....I am so glad to inspire you to write such lovely words, wow! I am amazed!

Warm Hugs~

  

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2007-09-14 11:19 PM


    

The Lady of the sea welcomes you!


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-15-2007 12:26 AM).]

Chosen one
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since 2007-09-13
Posts 29

5 posted 2007-09-15 10:06 AM


WOW Linda thank you

i am so excited to start here, even though i am working on my site. i am also going to Australia. thank you for such a nice response

Hugs and smiles  

Chosen one
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since 2007-09-13
Posts 29

6 posted 2007-09-15 10:09 AM


sunshine-

thank you so much for excepting my joining. i am very happy that i found this wonderful site, and i am looking forward to adding more poem as i start.

have a great Day!

Chosen one
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since 2007-09-13
Posts 29

7 posted 2007-09-15 10:11 AM


ARH,

thank you for helping find something to make my poem about. this a fun poem to do. if it weren't for you, i probably have been continuing my website.

paradise islands
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since 2007-09-15
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8 posted 2007-09-15 02:58 PM


Again, your poetry is great

i love you way of describing the daughter of Poseidon

great poem

Chosen one
Junior Member
since 2007-09-13
Posts 29

9 posted 2007-09-15 03:03 PM


again


thank you so much,

your like an angel popping out no where!

i truly mean it

thank you!

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2007-09-16 05:39 PM


chosen one -

this poem is very well done, and i wish to see more of your poetry.

it made me want to go swimming lol


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