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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Some days….. more than others with reasons unexplained and these emotions undefined so unrefined and raw in my heart, softly stewing feel the storm of you imminently brewing steadily undoing me and I unravel what is already threadbare and there unprotected from this aching unexpected it’s all I can do I know oh I know no..no there never will be me letting you go ~SEA~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting, thought-provoking and 'visually stunning' write (both the 'shaped' poetry and the photo.-image) [a most enjoyable 'read'] serious applause! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah Susan  you write me again and againa touching poem and picture once more |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I can live with that!  Nicely done dear lady.If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you guys are so awesome...thank you!!  |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
and I unravel what is already threadbare and there unprotected from this aching unexpected Awsome choice of words to project a vivid image and emotion. Well done, Milady... Write On!! MoonShadow . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
read this quick yesterday but couldnt reply at that moment so I wanted to be sure to get back in here and tell you how much I enjoyed this. Yer hearts showin lady.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh Susan, I absolutely love that the picture brings home the "never" of letting go..  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Susan...Wonderful write...Paul My favorite part is it’s all I can do I know oh I know no..no there never will be me letting you go ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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k20z3 Junior Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 10 |
Very good write |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
visually powerful, I enjoyed the internal rhyme. Very very nice! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lovely work ms suesea |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ponderful and wonderful, this presentation. I normally don't care for photo-writes, preferring to conjure up my own imagery based upon a writer's word choices. In this case, the photo intrigues, and enhances poetic interpretation. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed these thoughts...although I am trying to let go...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
the picture of the person sitting in the sun's rays could be a story of itself. Lots of feelings planted within this poem, well done Susan. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You write beauty amidst all the thoughts to consider And the picture is incredible and works so well with this poem. A |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so much for the kind words! It makes me smile...the picture, I was looking for one to go with this and when I came to that one, it was perfect to me. I'm glad you could see what I did |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
so first off... i frickin' a love the picture and the poem was amazing!!! The word choice was excellent One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Sea, this is a very heart felt piece my friend and I so felt the emotion, wonderful writing, thanks for sharing. Rick |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Sea, this is absolutely lovely love these lines ... can just -feel- them it’s all I can do I know oh I know no..no there never will be me letting you go ~Sheli By words the mind is winged |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
there are just some we never let go of, beautifully said SEA... ~~**~~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
SEA, this was just so beautiful my friend, penned with heartache ink, by a heart that longs and won't let go; so much enjoyed the talent shown and the emotion of this, thank you. Rick |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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