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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2007-09-11 07:28 AM





A Prayer In Earnest

            


I have no extra special words
no fancy tribute shall I write
rather I’ll say a prayer of thanks
for the men and women that still fight.

When I am praying this prayer
I’ll ask for all terrorism to cease
and for help to stop the madness
with a special request for world peace.

I’ll ask the Lord to gently hold us
with his tender loving hands
and to lead us with his wisdom
that we all might love our fellow man.

A prayer, that they not be forgotten
the unsung heroes who gave their all
those who were among the innocent
or defending us, that we might not fall.

Please bless the families left behind
my prayer, Lord please help them understand
let them know their loved ones are remembered
and that they are now held in Angels hands.

I’ll then pray for everyone to join the circle
the circle of peace that encompasses all
and this prayer, I’ll pray in earnest
Lord please guide us when upon your name we call.


{dedicated to the fathers, the sisters, the mothers,
the brothers, the daughters and sons...God bless them all.}

© dmsmith 09-06-02



© Copyright 2007 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
MoonShadow
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1 posted 2007-09-11 07:34 AM


Appropriate and inspiring. Well written, Donna.

          MoonShadow
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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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2 posted 2007-09-11 10:04 AM


Silently joins the circle and sends thoughts of love and peace.

Alison

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-09-11 12:16 PM


I earnestly join you in prayer ~

"to the fathers, the sisters, the mothers,
the brothers, the daughters and sons...God bless them all."

Amen

Exceptionally moving write.

Love, Peace, & Harmony,

Linda

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2007-09-11 10:32 PM



and for my Christopher
patrolling the Tigris
with a gun


this is so special to me gentle Donna
thank you


LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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Australia, Victoria
5 posted 2007-09-11 10:40 PM



Thank you Gentle Spirit for such a lovely poem.  
LindsayP

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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6 posted 2007-09-12 05:52 AM


I like the thoughts in this prayer...James
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2007-09-12 06:21 AM


I think an earnest prayer
is always needed...

thank you.


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