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PazSqual
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0 posted 2007-09-10 09:48 AM



Opposites Attract

isn't it strange how life's paths
can bring two total strangers
to meet at a crossing

whether here by fate
certainly not coincidence
who knows, maybe destiny

two lives opposite
each other meet

one giving up on love
thinking time has passed by

the other cast out into the world
never knowing how it feels
to be loved
never able to show love back

both strangers to the world
opposite in life attract

Scared, afraid to reach out
maybe stumble at the first step
we have gotten here for some reason
both lives long
and unhappy in different ways

lets us walk slowly
into what lays ahead
hold on to the dream we all wish for
time will tell us if it is
just outside the next door

[This message has been edited by PazSqual (09-10-2007 10:38 PM).]

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TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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1 posted 2007-09-13 01:28 AM


This is beautiful. very good.

enjoyed

Tomtoo

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-09-13 06:22 AM


A friend of mine was telling me today a discussion he and his new girlfriend was having about ying and yang...it makes sense...James
Kahlil
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3 posted 2007-09-13 09:48 AM


It is strange and wonderful
when we become willing to be
alive in each moment without
the "controls".
I enjoyed this write very much.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-09-13 11:14 AM


A relationship of opposites, can be exciting and dynamic! ~ and each can learn so much from the other!

May yours be one of harmony and growth ~ and joy!

I enjoyed your poem very much!

Hugs to you,
EA

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2007-09-14 03:20 PM


Be brave of heart,
step through the next door
into open arms
of Love,
for it is...
the essence of
Life.
  

MegMeg
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since 2007-05-14
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6 posted 2007-09-14 03:55 PM


Very lovely. thanks for sharing!
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