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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Now that I have you right where you were never expected what do I do? From somewhere out of the blue came the slight touch of such emotional words and even now; I can't be sure that I heard that feeling felt through twinkling brown eyes or is it the way that you leave me all wrapped up in sighs. If this is that thing called love then I guess I must be infected but I'm shakin' my head... you were never expected. If the sun never rises I want to go down in flames I want the last thing I hear to be you whisperin' my name. Each moment together is time that we borrow so hold me tight and love me like there's no tomorrow. {Trace A} |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, I have never read a poem of yours that failed to impress and move me. "Now that I have you right where you were never expected what do I do?" ~ So cute, clever ~ and sweet. May I suggest you hang on and enjoy the ride! lol Love to you, Linda  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Enjoy what is for as long as it is..  love the picture as well as the words.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
isnt that the best?? the never expected...lovely to see and feel....   sis...~~**~~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The greatest gifts are often those we never expected... or thought we deserved. *S* I really like this... reading it leaves a smile! *S* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done, very well done. sometimes great things come wrapped in most anything, or nothing at all. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine Romantic 'write'! [...most pleasant, rewarding 'read'!] Applause!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*just smiling* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sure sounds like love to me, and Donna, you look good wrapped up in it! *hugs*...jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it is those that are never expected that taste so sweet gentle Donna hugs to you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each for sharing a moment of smile with me.  |
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