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Open Poetry #41

Stymie

zapple
New Member

since 2007-09-09

Posts 4
Englishman Living in the U.S

0 posted 2007-09-09 01:08 PM

Fast the source of broken vows
by sleepless day by daydream tide's
incessant pulse of thought and time O,
ever curse on snarls and sigh
that wont let go this feeble frame
that cant let go her novel grace.

Voodoo doll your knives by smile
wreak havoc simple breath and taste
all bland and spent and number grey
the times apart that you not know
my nether plague my wanton woe
my very heaven little you.

To hold behind and pull in tight
to scent to smell in raining hair
to touch to feel young tender skin
in trembling truth and open eyes...

O, mercy fall before I fade
and feast upon this rising pit
anathematize a pointless dream
that claws and claims my every all.

Bronzeage
Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 197

1 posted 2007-09-09 02:30 PM

This is an interesting first post. I look forward to more work.

Welcome ro Pip.

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

2 posted 2007-09-09 03:27 PM

I don't get it, but thats nothing new. I'll try your next one and see if i can figure that one out. Welcome

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2007-09-10 08:51 AM

The mind just won't let go of
pain, will it, zapple?

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