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Sexy_Tator_Tot
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since 2007-08-31
Posts 42
Arkansas

0 posted 2007-09-07 11:43 AM



A man went off to war that day.
Three children sat in bed to prey.

A lonely solider closed his eyes
as smoke from gunshot filled the skies.

A wife at home sat alone.
Scared to death she'd stay that way

she'd prey harder every day.
A solider now in the midst of war

had finally just found a door
a door that opened to his heart

a piece of him that could not part.
A wife, three kids still held his heart.

His mind went back to the war,
but something happened not intended

two shots and his life had ended.
Three children sit in church today

ready to make their first prayer.
One for father safe and sound

walking on the holy ground.
One for mom to fill a hole

that lay deep down inside her soul.
Final words must be said

a woman stands on behalf the dead.
She shuts her eyes says let it be

my heart has told me freedoms not free.


© Copyright 2007 Mia Oslund - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-09-11 02:53 AM


Can't let this get buried yet -- what a tribute to those who have fought and died.  And what a tribute to those waiting behind - and for those left behind.

Mia, good write.  Welcome to PiP.

Alison

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-09-11 05:33 AM


Nice writing...James
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