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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-09-05 06:56 AM



when we galloped galaxies
through the hardwood paper blinds
our fingers were the only suns
of twin children's gloves
always more than just two it seemed

born on a sunset's horizon line
where the rail tracks were narrow
enough be on both sides
without a fence to dangle
just the truest of confusion

between right and wrong
and sinning and satiation
but we realized how close we were
so it didn't matter what others said
unless it was profane enough

to make us laugh at their words
we had already used in soups
then glued the letters on our skin
to dry in memory ovens like today
when we were sitting mostly partial

with our shoes pulled down reckless

______________

daark

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1 posted 2007-09-05 09:11 AM


"just the truest of confusion

between right and wrong
and sinning and satiation
but we realized how close we were
so it didn't matter what others said
unless it was profane enough

to make us laugh at their words"

you are the coolest....but you knew that, huh?

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-09-05 09:24 AM


you make me smile  
aziza
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3 posted 2007-09-05 10:43 AM


If I sleep too late for a morning cup of coffee before work, I know, at least, my poetry addiction will be well-fed.

Thank you for that.

A

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2007-09-06 06:35 AM


ms suesea, thank you lady friend.

__________

ms gs, thanks babe for the read

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ms az, oh I do love feeding your addiction/s, thanks ms

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