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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-08-31 11:38 AM




My mind is foggy,
I can't stay awake,
let me dream,

Take me away,
to where you are,
mystical, magical world,

allow me to breathe,
to live, to dance,
never escape this romance,

Take me away,
close to your heart,
where thoughts are one,

Our world of dreams,
don't wake me,
hold me close,

Mold me with your hands,
heal me with your heart,
fuse our souls back together,

Take me with you,
some distant place,
in dreamtime,

let my lips please,
your ears,
with words of love,

We can fly upon the stars,
creating our own,
constallation,

Inisde the heavens,
it will be a display,
for all lovers thereafter.

Let me close my eyes,
kiss me to never awaken,
In dreamland with you.


© Copyright 2007 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-08-31 04:14 PM


I like the thoughts of this...James
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
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2 posted 2007-09-01 03:34 AM


wow, this is so very romantic! and the picture too.
love the read
Tomtoo

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2007-09-01 05:58 AM


James...hopefully my goal is to inspire you to write more romantic poems!
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2007-09-01 06:01 AM


Tom....

  Romance is what I am all about,
of course you know that by now!

Thank you!

Chosen one
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since 2007-09-13
Posts 29

5 posted 2007-09-14 04:40 PM


ARH,

As my second day on pip talk, i have learned that people call you ARH (A Romantic heart). well, i have learned by reading your poems that you are an angel. an angel with wings to fly beyond everyone else.
this poem is one heck of a master piece! i have hanged this one a my wall of poetry, and today i will make more copies to send to friends.

with the hugs and smiles

CHOSEN ONE  

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