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Paralyzer |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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Well I'm not paralyzed, But I seem to be struck by you. There's something about you, And everything that you do. The way you flip your hair, The way you make me stare. Well I'm not paralyzed, But I seem to be struck by you. Your beautiful brown eyes, Tell me no lies. The softness of your lips when we kiss, Five A.M. back rubs that put you in a bliss. I'm not paralyzed, But I seem to be struck by you. Watching you sleep in my arms at night, See you smile at the dawns first light. Watch you go about your daily task, Wish I had kisses in a flask. Well I've been paralyzed and I'm struck by you. I am the little cracked mirror |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like Hot Flakes has met his love match! Lucky you! ~ Lucky her!  I very much enjoyed this aspect of your writing ~ and you! Big hug, EA |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful feelings expressed , you sound to be spellbound Hope |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Looks like that snowflake is melting fast from the heat of love..... |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
wow, what a love poem!!! enjoyed the read Tomtoo |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
And here I thought it was your dad and school keeping you accupied.... |
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