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a voice beyond the door
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a voice beyond the door |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
speaking siren sounds with velvet voice so sweet she lay nestled in the security of watching eyes— late at night we three talked a friend, myself, and the voice beyond the door with silken speech, I crafted words that worked their auditory charm and permeated the curtain placed upon that door of oaken words that night as locks did double duty and kept our souls apart soon, a connection made, the voice beyond the door chose not my friend, and he did leave that voice to only me—we talked and laughed and talked, eyes never meeting, never knowing one another and the next day we left and went our ways to boundaries drawn by lines distanced by the miles we never spoke again and that door is but a memory… alas, we’ll never meet, never know, never…, but then I fear I hear another voice, a voice beyond the door [This message has been edited by steavenr (02-16-2007 01:27 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is a striking write...brought many thoughts swirling to me. You captured, for me, the barriers we all place around what is most precious and sensitive to us. Well written. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr There are no end of voices or doors, enjoyed the read. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, thank you for your insightful comments... Seymour...dear sir, you speak wisely...thanks for reading... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thought-provoking poem I love it |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hmmm, mysterious...please if you will explain the poem...made me so curious...there are and could be so many translations....wonderfully done... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
yes thought provoking and mysterious and I'm with LeeJ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
gosh, I was mesmerised by this! well done!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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