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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-02-15 12:42 PM



Do you hear that?

Shhh....
come now,
rest your palm here

lightly upon my chest;

feel the
fluttering
of love softly drumming
in low strum
humming

of my heart sounds.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-02-15 06:16 PM


Oh, oh! I put my hand there and then realized that I was putting my hand on your chest! lol

A whisper-soft and delicate strumming from your heart pen.



Linda

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
2 posted 2007-02-15 07:55 PM




gentle Donna
nothing sounds better than
the sound
of love softly drumming

I love it


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2007-02-15 08:04 PM



Oh, the humbeat of a heartsong...
this will linger in my mind all night...
and for a few nights,
so I shouldn't wonder
why the urge...






Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2007-02-15 08:27 PM


yes ladies, dear friends, thank you for listening, for hearing....
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2007-02-15 09:27 PM


all else is quiet...lovely write
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2007-02-15 10:14 PM


Gentle Spirit
LOL I would love to. A beautiful write.
  

LeeJ
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7 posted 2007-02-16 09:01 AM


feel the
fluttering
of love softly drumming
in low strum
humming

of my heart sounds.


how lovely!!!

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
8 posted 2007-02-16 05:32 PM


Sorry I love the poem, but I'm sure if I was to take up your invitation my heart would be racing!  (LOL)

Ivor

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