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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-01-06 04:19 PM


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I'm as much . . .
in the land of Duh
as I was before.

I feel myself. . .losing words.

Soon . . .
except for a laugh . . .
I won't be able
to think at all.

I miss you.

Please come home.


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-01-06 04:45 PM


My feelings exactly...I'm missing a woman in Chicago right now...will she come home...I'll know soon enough...James
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2 posted 2007-01-06 07:03 PM


Oh, to be missed this much.
*sigh*
But, Hockey Night In Canada outshines me.
Good write John !!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

wredgranny
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3 posted 2007-01-06 07:05 PM


Soon . . .
except for a laugh . . .
I won't be able
to think at all.


~AHO~ Well said!


  granny!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-01-06 07:51 PM



Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-01-06 11:48 PM


John, I'll have good thoughts for her return   enjoyed... RDB
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6 posted 2007-01-07 05:04 PM


I feel myself. . .losing words.

~*~

When overwhelmed...
I relate.

I am oft'times
overwhelmed.

:hugs


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7 posted 2007-01-13 09:21 AM


This makes me think of a poem I wrote once, about a picture that could say a few words that the painter wanted to hear, while he was painting it.....dunno if I still have it, but after reading this I think I'll go looking for it!

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8 posted 2007-01-23 02:05 PM


I know what it is to miss this much... but never could have written it so well. *S* Superb!
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