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howardtsu
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0 posted 2007-02-13 12:13 PM



    she ended up in the delicate situation

of having to choose my predicate creations

over a boy already giving her enough elation

to livin' up an audience at a Chris Tucker concert

so where do i belong in her life especially since we've never been able to move in concert

                              together

             i've weathered so many storms

to sit next to her and keep her warm

but obviously someone else was born

                            to love her



                                                            howard



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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-02-16 09:06 PM


Howard... you have enough strength to keep weathering the storms....loved this! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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