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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
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0 posted 2007-02-12 12:26 PM


Thoughts of you
if they came in waves
I would drown
Crashing
Tumbling down

The longer I dreamed I might find her
the stronger these feelings became
Beg and borrow reminds her
I never intended to stay

Thoughts of you
Inescapable
Till I beg for less
Come to me in drops
Fall on me
Like rain


© Copyright 2007 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
1 posted 2007-02-12 12:46 PM


and it's as if rain is falling on my soul from the very hand of God....I need this rain....

~~~kingsangel~~~

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2007-02-12 01:44 PM


"Thoughts of you
Inescapable
Till I beg for less
Come to me in drops
Fall on me
Like rain"

nice...very nice...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2007-02-12 01:51 PM


Robert  
Enjoyed the read.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2007-02-16 10:10 PM


yes, I enjoyed this too Robert - well done   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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5 posted 2007-02-16 11:44 PM


lovely words
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