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steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2007-02-12 10:56 AM

thy first embrace, beware its siren sounds
lest tendrils sweet entwine thy mind’s desire
and stifle strong thy senses in its bounds—
set free thyself and light thy soul afire

to love unchained, untrussed, thy appetite
for unexplained and verdant sighted dreams
beats strong upon thy heart’s impassioned might
and settles soft in thoughts and quiet schemes

in fantasy so free and bold it turns
the eye of soul into reality
and traces thought do touch thy skin and burn
in fervor fraught with love’s acidity

and bond the hearts of lovers soft in one
to plant and bloom desire so fresh begun

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-02-12 11:01 AM

in fantasy so free and bold it turns
the eye of soul into reality
and traces thought do touch thy skin and burn in fervor fraught with love’s acidity

amazingly beautiful

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2007-02-12 12:06 PM

B E A U T I F U L ! !

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

3 posted 2007-02-12 12:49 PM

I love this truely beautiful poetry....Plant more my gardener friend there is way too much planting of evil

~~~kingsangel~~~

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

4 posted 2007-02-12 12:53 PM

It all begins with a "first". Well written. Enjoy your "voice".

Robert

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2007-02-12 01:04 PM

A voice that speaks volumes heart to heart.
This is magnificent in it's honesty and truth...thoughts I share, views I've come to know.
First embrace...wonderful write Steaven.
TD

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-02-12 06:16 PM

"thy first embrace, beware its siren sounds
lest tendrils sweet entwine thy mind’s desire
and stifle strong thy senses in its bounds—
set free thyself and light thy soul afire"

truly insightful
and so well written

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2007-02-12 06:25 PM

I kept going back to reread this verse:

"to love unchained, untrussed, thy appetite
for unexplained and verdant sighted dreams
beats strong upon thy heart’s impassioned might
and settles soft in thoughts and quiet schemes"

~ Utterly loverly!

Linda

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2007-02-12 08:37 PM

LeeJ, thank you…I like that part myself
Enchantress…thank you…that means a lot
Angel4aKing, thank you, I shall try
Robert, thank you for your kind comments
TD, so glad you read and commented…thank you kindly
Lady, you are too kind
Earth Angel, appreciate your thoughfulness

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia