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Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
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0 posted 2007-02-09 11:38 PM


The South Amerika

Wouldn’t you like it?
Be m’friend and roller-skate on
bodies not belonging to us in
Buenos Aires.
Thinking Atlantic
notions sunk to the bottom
of nothing.
Submerged in cleanliness
and Godlessness,
drinking feelers
feeling southern polar
projections touching almost something.
Tourists without camcorders
hump each other in Montevideo,
capturing a moment that feels
too Las Vegas to boast about.

Head Cheese & Chicken Feet

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Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
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Greenville, South Carolina
1 posted 2007-02-11 11:04 PM


Maybe I should've mentioned clouds or daisies... or something like that?

Head Cheese & Chicken Feet

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