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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2007-02-09 01:54 AM



Many days without writing...heh, not even a sigle idea on my mind but tonight..i got one, let's see if it works!.

Here we go,

The End of the Dream

dreams
they are so beautifull
yet sometimes they are so sad

dreams
tey are so full of feelings
sometimes we don't understand them
but we know they are there

dreams
the only problem they have is
when they end
we forget them
no matter the feeling
no matter the beauty

so what happens when they are ending?
what happens at the end of the dream?
what makes us forget?
is it some kind of magic?
the end of the dream
a mistery i want to solve

dreams
i don't know how to remember them
i don't know how to keep them on my mind
and i can't dream them twice

all i know is that
maybe at the end of the dream
the very hope and our wishes for it coming true
make us forget we dreamt it
and no matter how hard i try
i will never know
what happens when the end of the dream comes.

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-02-09 10:25 AM


a very good take on dreams, loved the questions asked...

enjoyed this thought provoking poem...thank you

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